Monday, May 17, 2010

Losing Control

Amazing!
The gentle tendril reach
Serene
Tranquil
Impossible
Yet it is happening
To me

The feeling
My words cannot fully portray
Loose
Free
Yet vested

Love!
Yes that's what it feels like
Love.
Clear
Calm
Bright
Utterly
Totally
Random.

6 comments:

lucci said...

"Love is a feeling you feel when you are about to feel a feeling you've never felt before".

Nevertheless, you recognise it, when you start to feel it. Hmmmm.............. i guess we must find a better definition after all.

Savour and enjoy it.

Lyrix said...

@Thanks lucci

MsAfropolitan said...

Love does indeed feel random, in a good way. Nice piece.

Lyrix said...

Thank you, MsAfropolitan.

Myne Whitman said...

Love, so many ways to describe them, I love yours. Lovely poem.

Lyrix said...

What can i say? Thank you, Myne.