Wednesday, August 24, 2011

In The Rain

Hold me in the rain/
Don't let me go/

I will, in the storm/
Won't let you go/

Let us shiver with cold/
Enfolded in tangled limbs/
Lost in mind with thought of want, need/

The wetness/
Sense of numbness/
Encased in clinging clothes/

Winding moves, made on badger feet/
Dance with me darling, just dance


Myne Whitman said...

I think encase should be in past tense, but otherwise, this is lovely!

VenusSpeaks said...

"I will, in the storm,
won't let you go"

Assurance is a wonderful thing to do. Sometimes, we forget that the people we love just needed to be told :)

...just dance ;)

Tetekai said...

@Myne: Thank you and your suggestion is noted.

@VenusSpeaks: :)(lalalalala)